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Re: The Secret

Post by Angel on Wed Jul 02, 2008 10:54 pm

The secret....

Her beauty entices and excites, though makes me wonder
How can such feelings invade me so strongly?
He engulfs me with his sensuality; with commanding force and care
Waves soar within me when he is near; his touch is powerful
She for her softness, her lips, her smile
Her gentle caress melts me
Desires run wildly; within my heart, my body, my soul

To experience you again
I shall be reborn
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Re: The Secret

Post by Z on Thu Jul 03, 2008 12:23 am

I like this Angel. I've read it over a few times, and I like the way I get lost in the speaker and the spoken of "I" "Her" "He"

It feels like you've given voice to the energy bond between the two lovers here!

This is the sort of insight that poets have the sort of light that they shine upon the world to illuminate the unseen! sunny Awesome.

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secrets no more

Post by Angel on Sun Jul 27, 2008 9:36 pm

When I was reborn, the world had changed
His gentle kisses had all but dried up
She took them with her while I slept
His sensuality; mine is no more
Pain runs wildly; within my heart, my body, my soul

how can such feelings invade me so strongly? Crying or Very sad


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